Hi mate, heres the latest flash mov. Be as brutal as you can, because it really isnt working at the moment. The timing and feel just isnt right. I think your right, it starts off too fast paced. If you could make a list of what needs changing, shot by shot that would be wicked. I think you have a good idea when it comes to editing and camera rules etc. Also please try and think of shots you would add and remove. Cheers pal X
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Cheers matey, will get on with this as soon as. Ill post what I've later this evening..x
ReplyDeleteI've always thought he reacts to suddenly at the beginning and I still stand by that. Also when he notices the wheel moving, I would make that more clear. I'd also have the shot of polisher cleaning the floor a lot closer in to emphasis the noise of it.
ReplyDeleteNice jip at 11 seconds by the way.