Okay

Well done a bit more work rendered off an occlusion aswell thought a bit about what you said and the more i look at it the more it looks like it should be for a game, so ifelt the best way forward was to make it more subtle. So, i have lowered some of the layers in photoshop and rendered off a new one i am also gona look at some films for inspiration. So the two images below are the old one and the new one with more subtle details on it. Will go college tomorrow depending on weather of course, but yeah its still along way away but its getting ther!